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第九单元 推展段落方法之二——叙述法

  

9．1叙述法

叙述法（narration）回答了“发生了什么”（what happened）这一问题。叙述经常用于讲述一系列事件。这种方法常用作小说（fiction）、传记（biographs）的支配方法，也可用作其他各种文体的辅助方法。例如，轶事（anecdotes）、寓言（fables）等都是用叙述形式阐述某一观点。

示范段落9－1

I was seven years old when I first became aware of the terrible power of guilt．For piling our toys into the toy box，Mother had rewarded my brother and me with five shiny pennies each．If I had ten pennies instead of just five，I could have bought a ginger bread man with raisin eyes and sugar－frosted hair．The image danced in my head all day，until，finally，I crept into my brother's room and stole his five pennies．The next morning，as my brother and I were dressing to go to school，I had all ten pennies in the pocket of my coat，cramming one of my father's handkerchiefs on top of them．As my brother and I lined up in front of Mother to be kissed goodbye，she looked at my bulging pocket with amazement．“What on earth do you have in your pocket？she asked．“It's nothing，”I said，as offhandedly as I could．“It's nothing at all．”Bewildered，but toobusy to investigate any further，Mother kissed me goodbye I ran out the door and down our gravel path as fast as my feet could carry me．But the farther from home I got，the more miserable I became．The shiny pennies in my pocket felt oppressively like one－ton boulders．And I was haunted by the idea that I had become a thief．Forgotten was the gingerbread man，for whose sake I had stolen my brother's pennies Finally，unable to bear my horrible feeling of guilt，I ran back home to blurt out my crime to my mother．

9．2示范段落分析

在上面段落中，作者在主题句中阐述了他的观点：I was seven years old when I first became aware of the terrible power of guilt．然后用一件轶事作为支持这一观点的细节，叙述发生了什么事，并说明了他的观点。

9．3关于如何写叙述段落的建议

1）只着重叙述有意义的事件和经历

尽量避免日常琐事和无聊事，只使用那些有助于阐明你的观点的事件和经历。

2）保持始终如一的着眼点

不管叙述是以第一人称或第三人称进行，都要尽量使语言从叙述者的着眼点（point of view）反映叙述者的见解和意向。

3）运用细节

写叙述段落时要运用细节，使人物栩栩如生，并在读者的想象中唤起事件发生的那种环境气氛。在描绘人物时也使用细节，使人物血肉丰满，形象生动。

4）使用时间顺序

叙述几乎总是使用时间顺序法来组织细节。（第12单元将讨论时间顺序法）

Exercise 9-1

Directions：Write a paragraph of narration using the given topic sentence．

Not knowing a language well can sometimes be embarrassing．

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Exercise 9－2

Directions：Write a paragraph of narration，telling about one of your memorable trip．

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好东西可真多呀！.

谢谢都都妈！.

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发一篇英文作文
THE NINE PLANETS
In the galaxy, there is a solar system, In the solar system, there are nine planets, which are Mercury, Earth, Venus, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune and Pluto, People call them the nine planets, and they were discovered by the scientists, People named them by the names of the roman gods.
   Mercury is the fastest moving planet in the nine. In a mercury year, there are only 88 days. Moreover mercury is the god of postmen, bankers, gymnasts and thieves. And he was the fastest one of the gods. So the people call it mercury.
   Venus is the god of love and beauty. Therefore, it gets the name of Venus.
   Mars is a strange planet. When the ancient people saw it, they think it is the mars, which is the god of war in roman myth. It is red. and it sometimes bright, sometimes dark. Therefore, they think it is the symbol of war.
Jupiter is the largest and the heaviest planet in the solar system, because it is so large, it is just like Jupiter in the roman myth, the king of the gods, so the ancient people called it Jupiter.
    Saturn is the most beautiful planet in the nine planets. Just like the gods of farmers-Saturn in Roman myth.
    Uranus is the god who created the world in the Greek myth. He’s the husband of GAEA (Uranus).
    Neptune was discovered by a German scientist in 18th century Neptune is the god of the sea. But I don’t know why people called it Neptune.
    Pluto is the coldest planet of the nine planets, just like Pluto, is the ruler of the under world. It is cold and is far away from the sun .Now pluto is not the number of the nine planets.
These are the nine planets. I like them very much because they are fantastic and interesting..

说实在的,儿子的英文作文还停留在流水帐,凑字数的阶段,你们从哪里开始写的?可以写那么好
现在还没有教复句,写出来的东西看起来还是比较幼稚

[ 本帖最后由 都都妈 于 2007-2-24 21:57 编辑 ].

我们也很幼稚的,基本上也不会用复合句的,在发一篇去年的都是简单句的自我介绍  
My name is peter. I’m twelve years old. I’m a student. I study in **** Middle School. Now I’ m having a holiday at home. I’m doing my home work now. Every day I get up at 9a.m and I watch television and play the computer from 10a.m to12a.m then I have lunch. After that, I do my home work from 1p.m to 2p.m. at last I have dinner at 6p.m, and I go to bed at 9p.m. I have a good holiday.
   I like see the movies .My favorite film is the the Lord of the rings I like it very much .And I want to be a director in the future. Steven Spielberg is my favorite director. He is the most famous director in the world. He directed E.T. I’m a big fan of him. I like to see his jaws. Although every body thinks it’s disgusting, but I think it’s excellent!.

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要做到,没有听到过的不要说,没有看到过的不要写.不然就会变成 清-ENGLISH

[ 本帖最后由 宝贝猪猪妈妈 于 2007-2-28 11:07 编辑 ].

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谢谢拉.